Chapter 2 Page 38
on September 19, 2018
at 1:30 PM
and modified on September 19, 2018. at 6:19 AM
Chapter: Chapter 2
Characters: The Bestower
Only 2 more pages left then its the Q&A!
This one was a pain to colour but I hope it was worth it.
Found this comic through a post on /co/ recommending webcomics, am enjoying it so far. Art is great. Little bit confused about the tone, as you have it all down to earth with school and the kids thereat but then have wacky backstories for Zeki and what we believed the backstory for Rachel was. I figure can’t exactly judge that yet, though, still just getting started. Another thing, the plots going pretty dang fast. Not sure if that’s good or bad. Glad it isn’t lagging too much – sans a bit of exposition – but I’m having a bit of a hard time keeping up.
But yeah, keep it up, great so far.
Yeah! I’ve heard this before, thing is i rewrote the whole story near the tail end of Chapter 1 (you can probably tell by the tonal changes) because I didn’t like where I was going so its really like, the stories reality split and followed its current path to its awful former one, so I’ve had to do a bit of cramming this chapter to fit in what I want and you know pacing will always be a webcomics downfall, either to fast or too slow depending on the person.
But yeah, I was more on a zany run at the start now its less that way?
Anyways thank you for reading, I’m also happy to hear someone on /co/ enjoyed the comic too! Hope it becomes easier to read as chapter 3 is defintely a easier chapter pace wise, and if you have any questions I’m always happy to answer~